3rd Quarter Submission

                       

Revision- Article

       

                                                

                             

The 2 pictures on the top are my original articles and the 2 pictures on the bottom are my revised articles. In my original I did not add page number so I inserted those on the bottom left and right corners. I also added a branding at the bottom of both pages. The Instagram I made for marketing was called @sarasotainaction so I decided to chose that to put at the bottom. 

Revision- Cover

              

To the left is my original cover and to the right is my revised cover. My biggest revision was making the font bigger because the main feedback I received was that my font was very hard to read. In order for there to be more grey space for the writing, I used the original photo instead of the cropped one. Throughout the cover, I changed all the fonts to make the letters thicker so they would be easier to read. I removed the outline around the text box because it makes the writing look more natural instead of sectioned off. I believe overall the cover is significantly better and more appealing to the eye of a reader because of the cleaner structure and larger font. 

Revision- Table of Contents

                      

To the left is my original table of contents and to the right is my revised table of contents. I decided to make the picture the whole background so that the softballs would be the main focus. I changed the font of the "Table of Contents" so the letters were more bold and stood out more. I also changed the font of the article descriptions because the old ones were the standard font and then I made the page numbers bold as well. By putting the different articles and page numbers in different spots of the softballs, I think it made the table of contents more unique than other designs. I also eliminated a lot of white space so it makes the page look less interesting.