Feedback/ Revisions

On the cover, most of the feedback I received was to enlarge the text because it was very hard to read. I had a couple small text boxes with an outline around them and a few people suggested I remove the outline so I have more space for the words. There was also mention that on the table of contents page I had a lot of white space. I should fill it with more pictures or even add more pages to the table of contents. In order to do so, I will most likely have to re organize the layout to something more broad within the page so I have more room to work with instead of sectioning off the pictures and words separately. Another thing I need to add is page numbers and a branding. I forgot to put them on my mid term submission so this will make my article look better. By making these changes, my magazine will look more appealing and professional.